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Review:Remus says:
I figured another review wouldn't hurt! Just making it more difficult for you to catch up on your review responses! :P Although, it'll be a short review cus I'm editing PoP and moaning about the lack of chocolate around here. Haha! XD

The line "You listen to me," James snarled with a burst of frustration, standing from his chair and pointing a steady finger at his friend. was very powerful to me. You have no idea how close I've become to my Remus and Wolf...so as soon as I read that line, I felt Wolf recoiling, ready to bring James back to his rightful place. Hahahah! Crazy, I know! But I absolutely loved that about that line.

I'm very intrigued as to who tried to get that letter from Beowulf! Was it Alrek? Bellatrix? Regulus? Another Death Eater? Gah! I must know! Haha!

Another thing, I like how you tie all the knots well together. You're very good at not leaving anything behind, like Alice's detention. I had totally forgotten about that!

That Petunia letter was fantastic! I mean it in a way that you've managed to capture her character so well that I just got so irritated at the contents. I could seriously picture a young Fiona Shaw (Petunia from the movies) penning that letter. Pure greatness!

OMG! FINALLY THOSE TWO KISS!! GAH! I've been waiting AGES to read that!

I think I spotted something. The line that says:

those restaurants that serves tiny potions of food that couldn't feed a Pixie--I think you meant Portions rather than potions.

Other than that, it was a fantastic chapter! You got me squeeing over here with those two and I wish you weren't taking this to that horrible doom! Waahh!!! :(

Ugh! Maybe you should A/U it! :P It'll make us feel better! Hahaha!

Until next time, dearie!

--Rosie

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