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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Review Tag!

This is a really sad oneshot. You convey Myrtle's sadness, loneliness and desperation perfectly, her wistfulness at never having a full life, while still feeling like the somewhat whiney, irritating girl we know in the original books. Her characterisation is great!

I think your prose is really good here too. It flows very well and is easy to read. You said in your A/N that this is out of your comfort zone, but you did very well and I enjoyed reading it :)

Great job!

Author's Response: Hi there :)

Thank you so much! With such characters, chracterisation is such a tricky thing. But it's also very important. I''m glad I've managed to win you over with it! It was meant to be sad, and it's good to know that that came through.

Oh wow :) thank you so much!
It's always nice to hear that it flows well. It was out of my comfort zone, mainly because of the genre. But thanks! :)

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