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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hello again! It's been a while since I last read this!

This was a really good chapter! I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical errors which is always a plus.

I quite liked Albus' point of view in this, it was really well done!

However, I just find it a tiny bit cliche that Danny and Cara's last memory together is an argument. Although, you did pull off Danny's emotions about it rather well.

Also, Aldrige is a git. :p I don't like his character at all, which is a good thing I suppose because you wrote him well then. :p

Anywho, this was a really good chapter! I loved the way you wrote the characters' emotions and the plot is very good so far! :)

- Kayla. :)

Author's Response: Hello (: Thank you for reading and reviewing!

I'm glad you liked Albus's point of view. He's a rather important character aside from Danny, so I hope that my readers will like him as well ^^
It is sort of a cliche but we will definitely see more of Danny and Cara moments (:
Aldridge IS a git. I really can't stand those people who know everything but rub it in your face. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!


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