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Review:BLONDEbehaviour says:
Hi there! Blondie here with your requested review :)

This was very entertaining to read! You really have an interesting aspect of Lily here, and i really really enjoyed it!

You have definitely succeeded in writing a darker Lily. We are always depicted that once she gets together with James that it is all happiness and love, but it shows that there can always be more to relationships, and I think you have depicted it well through this idea of her being worried about what this baby will mean for her and her happiness which already seems to be flickering.

The story does make sense. I like how you were vague at times, it helps to give the mystery of her unhappiness through, as well as showing that there may be more to Lily, a darker side that we were not shown as their loved ones were trying to remember them in a happy way.

I think it does deviate from the canon, but not in a bad way. Like i said in the paragraph before this, we may have been given a blurred judgement of the couple, and this just shows a different side to her, and it is effective in this storyline.

Hope this was helpful! Really,really cool story! Thank you for requesting :)

Please respond to this review :)

Grace

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for stopping by! I'm sorry the response was a bit delayed; my work week is extremely busy. Anyway, I'm here now!

It's great to hear that you found my Lily interesting. I agree that our go-to perception of her romance with James is of them riding off into the sunset, so to speak, and I wanted to go back to the notion that she's young and probably scared about becoming a mother, especially in the midst of a war. I think part of it is that we know her through others, like you said, and they only recall the fondest parts of her.

I'm glad that the story makes sense and that the canon deviation still seems to fit.

Thanks so much for your kind review :)

-Amanda


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