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Review:MC_HK says:
Hi!

I like this chapter very much! Your Delilah character is a bit Rita Skeeter-ish, no? Nothing wrong with that, I quite like it! The dialogue and flow on events is very good as well, it's all smooth and you don't have much to hinder the flow. I like the way Dominique thinks about Teddy, too. Makes me smile :) "...she didn't know wether she still had the right to miss him." I loved that line so much!

I do see a few grammatical errors and punctuational errors. You could do a thorough read through to catch them all though. They are very minor, and currently do not do too much to distract me. I also feel like some bits are very disjointed. Some sentences could be lengthened just to make it easier for the reader. That's jsut my opinion though.

Anyways, lovely read! Can't wait to read more!

MC_HK

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you for reading and reviewing. Apologies for the late response. I am glad you liked the chapter. Delilah is not a very good character yeah xP We'll see more of her later. It's a relief to hear you found the dialogue and flow okay as I always worry about those. Aw I am glad you are liking Dom/Teddy.

Yeah, english is not my first language so how much ever I practice I do end up making grammar errors, I'll try to go back and edit though. I'll try to work on the sentences and such too, thank you.

Thanks!


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