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Review:toomanycurls says:
Sirius' reaction to Moody is hilarious. I laughed when Tonks was wondering who spiked their pumpkin juice. I love that Snape's patronus was used to communicate with them. [Tangential thought] I wonder how many people knew what Snape's patronus was as it was his declaration of love for Lily. It could have been something too subtle for Remus and Sirius to connect to but they connected Harry's patronus to his dad. I'm really not going anywhere with this, it's just a thought/needless ramble.

Ninja hair?!? That killed me. ^_^ Really hilarious. I mean, my hubby asked me what I was laughing at hilarious.

I really liked their tracking spell. It does a really good job explaining how they managed to find the group of teenagers in such a dark maze.

The small signs of care from Remus are brilliant. It really speaks volumes to his feelings for her without being overt.

The duel scene with Tonks and Bellatrix was really good. I totally see her getting distracted during a duel. The last thoughts she has before conking out were amazing. I liked that Molly's cooking made it in with Sirius and Remus.

The curse from Bellatrix that you explain is amazing. I like how you've taken a known spell and made it worse in a way that seems like it could have happened.

Oh man, her reaction to Sirius' death is so sad. The guilt and remorse really got to me here. It felt like real grief (very spectacular and sad).

omg, I'm famous!! Thanks for the note in your a/n. ^_^

Author's Response: Hi Rose!

Haha, I really loved writing that scene with Moody mainly due to what happens later and it was nice to balance it out with that. I don't know, but it is something interesting to ponder over. I assume that Remus and Sirius knew, but I guess Tonks wouldn't have cared much about it to want to know.

Haha, I didn't expect it to be so funny but I'm glad you liked it! The hints about Remus in this chapter were far too much fun to include, so yay for you liking them too.

I'm so glad you liked the duel scene as I was little worried due to not having much practice writing them. I had to squeeze in the cooking to make it somewhat light-hearted.

That last scene was horrible to write, but I'm glad that you liked because it was worth going through the tears for it!

Thanks for the amazing review, and of course you deserve to be famous :D

-Kiana


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