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Review:thisoneguy says:
Grammer and spelling could use work. Story gets boring.

Author's Response: Grammar and spelling are getting fixed little by little, I am editing the chapters when I get a chance. As for the story getting boring, I know it's a little slow to begin with but in order for two people to go from hating each other that much to falling in love, it takes time. I hate reading stories where they hate each other and then are in love in the very next chapter so. I will say that if you keep reading you are very close to the first signs of them sort of liking each other and that after chapter 12 things really do speed up.
Thank you for the constructive criticism, I do hope that you continue to read.

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