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Review:AlexFan says:
So to be honest, I picked this out of all of the other ones to read because it was Jily and I love me some Jily. I'm so glad that I picked this though because it was brilliant. I don't think I've ever been more excited to read a Quidditch match in my entire life of fanfiction. Usually I get through them slowly because I'm not thrilled abour reading another one but yours got me excited and kept me on my seat. I think that's mostly due to the fact that you didn't go into detail about the ENTIRE match but wrote just enough that it kept the reader interested.

My favourite line in this entire one-shot was He'd pretty much set himself up to be crushed on a near-daily basis by her for six years, and she didnít think he liked to suffer? I couldn't help but laugh at that because it was so true!

This was a lot different than most Jily stories that I've read because it doesn't have any kissing or anything like that in it, it's just a sweet Jily moment that makes me smile like an idiot and cheers me up.

I'm not really sure how to put it into words but this story just made me really happy but relaxed me at the same time. It flowed really well, I'm glad that you steered clear of the purple prose (something that I've come across while reading other works).

So basically, I thought this was brilliant and I loved it.

Author's Response: Hi there!

I love Jily too so I totally understand that!

Wow, thank you so much! It was really scary to write so the fact you enjoyed it makes me so happy!

Gah, I can't thank you enough for this wonderful review!

Lauren :)

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