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Review:patronus_charm says:
This story just keeps on getting crazier, but in a good way mind! This version of Hogwarts is a lot better than I could have ever imagined. Albus never responded to the question over whether he was using Clemence or not. Iím inclined to think so, but hey Iíll never know. I wonder whether Albusí sort of crazy plan will ever work. With the craziness of the end of this chapter I think Clemence will go through with it because it seems as if sheíll need something to hold onto to give her something and that something will be Albus :P

The questioning with Pickett after was really brilliant! I just love him as a character, and I wish he appeared just as much as Albus did because then I would be very happy! The madness with Janey and Team Rose or Team Dom was also really great. I canít believe theyíve managed to spawn colour coded merchandise in such a short space of time. It really shows the power of the Weasley family. Itís strange how Albus hasnít said much about it and itís making me curious as to what he thinks.

Aw Scorpius was so cute in Defence! He just seemed so lost and I just wanted to go and hug him because he was so clueless. Though we got to find out that big scoop which sort of made me forget about poor old Scorpius! So we have to warring pairs Albus/Clemence and Rose/Dom. I wonder who will win out of both of them. I mean the former couple actually have something real to fight over, the others itís just like what. You made this massive feud when he likes neither of you. Oh well, itís great comedy value!

Thereís been such a big succession of cliff-hangers lately though I have to say this is one that I donít want to read on about. I would hate to see a crushed Clemence as sheís really endeared herself to me lately. Oh well, here goes.

-Kiana

Author's Response: I'll stop the crazy at alien invasion, but not prior. It's only going to escalate! I get the feeling I end up answering few questions as the chapters go on, bringing up more, and then making old answers even more ambiguous xD

Guh, you'll see Pickett more later on (as I think you have). He's precious to me, just a little out of Clemence's mind. It's been pretty interesting to figure out ways to bring in subplots that are otherwise not of Clemence's interest, something I never had to consider much for non-first person fic.

And I was just thinking about Albus' opinion of the whole war--it's simply something that hasn't come up, but something I'm writing about right now :)

Bahah, I love how you see already everyone's fighting and at war, because the latest chapters are when the war metaphors really rev up. To think, entire wars over silly sappy Scorpius. One would imagine he'd be covetous, but he's only good for cowering in a corner and pointing out wallpaper.



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