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Review:patronus_charm says:
I have to say, Iíve really loved your character development of Clemence in this story! I really like how before she was what Albus likes to refer to her as, but not sheís more unsure of herself, more aware of others and itís a really lovely transition. I guess itís because sheís sort of messed up her private life which has put her professional one into question.

The scene between Pickett, Dom and Clemence was really great! I love seeing what the therapy actually entails and with the inputs from Pickett it made it really authentic and great. The silent warring between Pickett and Clemence also had me laughing, and I have to say, I actually am disappointed that Pickett didnít pluck up the courage to tell Dom. They would be such a quirky couple but work somehow. I think it was the last scene in the last chapter which really swayed me.

Appy was insanely scary in this chapter! I had always wondered whether it was wrong of Clemence to underestimate her intelligence and I think she was. With all that questioning in the dorm room it definitely felt as if Appy knew something was going on between her and Albus. I mean, the carpet cleaner sort of did kill it. Then when she forced Clemence to swear I was just thinking dundundun in my head and knowing something bad was about to happen.

I did wonder what the consequences of not going to the Astronomy Tower would be, and I bet Clemence is really regretting it now! Albus is just so manipulative in this with doing that and trying to control Clemence in a way but for some unknown reason I still like him and cheer him on when he appears. I feel like I should be throwing rotten tomatoes at him instead!

Anyhow, I thought that was a really awesome chapter! :D

-Kiana

Author's Response: Clemence's character really comes out in the later chapters! I wanted to show her world as she sees it first, one where she is totally in control and she acts untouchable when she knows she isn't. She's spoiled by a lack of conflict in her life, in a way. Here's where it all the bad stuff starts rushing back in :D

I love writing the three of them together! They're really quite close friends, even though they don't necessarily seem like such from their personalities. A distant sort of caring, because that's the only way they know how :P Clemence hangs around rather similar people.

Bahaha, Appy only gets crazier in this fic. There's only one way to go for that girl.

ALBUS IS THE BOY YOU LOVE TO HATE TO LOVE :D I don't think anyone would have it any other way :P

♥ thanks again Kiana ^__^ It's been so fun seeing someone read through this entire fic with such detail; I don't think I've had that happen in ages!


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