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Review:patronus_charm says:
I honestly think this has been one of the craziest chapters so far :P There I was thinking Albus has gone and dropped Clemence in it and sheís done for now and she comes up with the amazing idea of the auction! I really wouldnít have wanted to be there while all that craziness was going on. I mean, it was like they were rioting against a corrupt leader not fighting over some teenage boy!

I donít know what caused that girl to fall, Iím just pitying her being stuck under the stampede of girls who may or may not have broken her bones. Seriously, they represent the losing team after a game of football more than a gaggle of girls :P This made me laugh way too much ĎI hear the Hufflepuff captain bellow, "CODE PINK!" as I dash past. Ď I love how itís not only a few of them who hold the same sentiments towards Appy and the gaggle of girls which follow her blindly.

The mad rush for somewhere to hide was brilliant! I think the thing which really topped it off was the way Professor Babbling started having a go at Albus and then it suddenly made sense when she saw those girls. The aspiring lawyers made me laugh way too much too, in fact, I was just laughing throughout the chapter as it was just so great!

When Albus and Clemence were trapped in that alcove with Albus being bare-chested I honestly thought that something was going to happen. I mean, there was tension and it was a small, enclosed space so it had all the recipe for another kissing scene, but I guess with swarms of girls running outside it did dampen the atmosphere. Albus still puzzled me in this chapter. I know heís got an agenda itís just whatís on it is the thing which is confusing me!


Author's Response: This probably /is/ the craziest chapter so far. I vaguely remember sitting down and brainstorming--ok, how can she //possibly// get out of this alive? (and then, for storytelling purposes, Alive but still in a pickle?)

etc would not be etc if not for the heightened atmosphere and exaggerated everything! A fic where the default is a screaming frenzy. I'm surprised so many people just accepted this as normal the first time they read through 8D Shirtless Albus Potter running through; don't mind him. Don't help him. Just being chased by a mob.

I have so many close encounters that in this story that I end up satirizing Clemence and Albus' close-encounter interactions (in chapter 14 or something). They're never very good at explaining themselves outright, eh? I doubt even they fully know what they're doing.

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