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Review:BookDinosaur says:
JACK! *rugby tackles* YOU UPDATED! *parties*

I loved reading this chapter! Ahaha, and of course you'd find a way to work the mallards in there! I find quite a lot of self-insertion into your stories...

But seriously Jack, can you pummel my feels any more than you already have? They're a puddle...over there. *points in a random direction* Oh, and can I just say that I love that kid having to deliver a letter to Charlotte? That made me laugh. Poor kid. Leo is manipulative. And he had to stay there until Charlotte had read it! Ahaha.

Well, anyway, I loved the Q-and-A. And how he knew it was her the whole time and I think I'll shut up or I'll start rambling. Gladiolus. Is that more self-insertion? I can't remember.

And Jack. Jack jack jack. You have to wrap up the Chleo for me, okay? And the tree, and the paper, and library book, and the poor kid passing notes between the two. And while you're at it, why don't you wrap up the ScoRose as well? Hmm? *hint hint* I NEED TO KNOW, JACK.

And Jellie - gah they are so sweet and I think Imma die. DIE, JACK. But shouldn't Madam Pomfrey have come out and told them to get back to their beds? :P Jellie Jellie Jellie.

So, you'll write the epilogue soon, yeah Jack? And then the sequel will go up! *is excited* No pressure. :P

PS - How was the mattress party?

Author's Response: Hahahahaha...gosh you make me laugh, Emily.

You should probably be excited for this sequel if you like self-insertions. I'll tell you a secret: ScoRose is based on my relationship with my fiance :P.

Actually, I looked up Gladiolus on the internet. I typed something like "flower with weird name" and that's what came up. I just needed something that would make an impression on a guy, ya know?

I've submitted the epilogue!!! BE PROUD OF ME! So things get wrapped up so nicely, that I made my fiance cry a little. A lot. Anyways, I'm excited for everyone to read it.

Oh, and the sequel will go up as soon as the epilogue gets validated. Am I efficient or what?

*hi-fives computer screen*

I got a small business mattress shop to fund the party for advertising throughout the party. It happens this Saturday, and everyone's excited. Other than that, life is slowing down. Finally.

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