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Review:Blake says:
Hi,

I've just finished reading the 5 chapters and I love where this is going so far! I like the main character very much and I like the way you've portrayed the characters we know from the series.

Georgie is, what I believe to be, like a diamond in the rough- she's got so many good qualities but doesn't seem to realise it yet.There's something about her that makes you like her. I would like to meet her in real life if it were possible because I think I would like her.

This chapter is fantastic- I love how you brought a background character to importance here and I love what the situation was. It was realistic and the way Georgie reacted to being told was perfect to her character.

The flirting between Georgie and Sirius is great as well. It's so unique and fun to read. I think they're both that little bit eccentric and that's what draws one to the other.

Keep up the story, I'll definitely be reading on!

Thanks

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your feedback!

You're metaphor about Georgie is really good; diamond in the rough, love it! Might have to use it :)

Thanks, I think this chapter is one of the better ones so far too- just because it's different and I wanted to change things up a little bit. This is definitely not the end of Andrea.

I'm so glad you like Georgie and Sirius' flirting, it is a bit weird isn't it? But I'm trying to make it suit them because I think they're both a little odd in their own ways.

Please keep reading, hopefully an update will happen soon!

-T


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