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Review:patronus_charm says:
Oh man the t-shirts! I donít know whether Iím crying or laughing hysterically. I really loved Domís reaction to them, and itís really making me wonder whether she wants to be the rumours or the rumour maker. But come on guys! Pull yourself together. Iím sure Scorpius is fairly hot but this hysteria over him is just like Potter (as in Harry) mania all over again. Iím guessing this is Cho/Ginny take two :P

So the cloak makes an appearance? I really loved how Albus just sidled in there acting all cool. I think the thing I like about him most is the way he gets under Clemenceís skin because like she said, she never expects to be unnerved like that, so seeing this new Clemence really does make me crack up. They seemed to have formed this weird rapport which I canít really describe. Either way, I love reading it as I never know whatís going to happen, so itís all good on that front!

James broke into Buckingham Palace? I need to know more about this :D

Appy and all the Q.G.A. girls are the perfect Twilight fan girls to go alongside the t-shirt wars :P Just reading that scene, I felt my IQ drop several points, so I donít want to think about the catastrophic damage caused to Clemenceís mind. The sad thing is how these people exist and how they actually will get meatloaf or whatever shaped in Albusí head. Though the way you portray him here does make it hard to resist him :P

Dundundun! Or not! This is the benefit of not yet reading live as I can find out the cliff-hanger right away. Another awesome chapter, by the way! ♥

-Kiana

Author's Response: I would totally freak out if someone made a shirt for me 8D which is once again me projecting myself onto Dom. IT'S JUST COOL but probably not a healthy phenomenon. Most definitely not, actually.

Ha, I heavily disliked both Cho and Ginny in canon; It was lose-lose for me! (I like Cho out of canon; the stories don't do their characters justice)

I adore writing Albus and Clemence when they get along, because their rapport is endless. And I get to pull out the crack, like James and Buckingham. I'd liken that adventure to the first Hangover movie.

I think it was a Bieber fan that did something like Bieber in the shape of meatloaf, and that's where I got the idea 8D so, you're totally right. There are people who would do that and that's sadly where I get my inspiration from. Two years ago, when I wrote this chapter, Twilight was still in the middle of its heyday, team-shirt wars abounding, so it was even more apparent back then! Oh, the merchandising people must've been so happy.

♥ thank you again Kiana c: can't wait to hear what you think!


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