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Review:Courtney Dark says:
This was an amazing chapter, and just so well written!

I really struggle to write chapters that are packed with action and drama and huge intense moments like this one, but you did a really good job! Thinking back on it, my heart was racing inside my chest for the duration of the chapter, which is definitely a clear signal I enjoyed it.

You write Snape so perfectly and so canon, as well. He seemed so...human in this chapter, with these real sort of emotions, and I can definitely see him turning spy for Dumbledore after this chapter. And you wrote Lucius Malfoy really well, as well. Hmm, and if Baby Harry and Baby Neville are on the way, that means Baby Draco is on the way too!

The encounter between Beth and Severus was awesome! I don't even know how to describe how I loved it so much, so just know that I, erm, loved it. Yay! (My reviews always sound so weird!)

Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I feel like I say that a lot, but I really am glad when you love a chapter! I always think I struggle writing action, but it always does appear to work out in my favor, and it makes me breathe a sort of sigh of relief when someone thinks I did it right. :P

SNAPEEE. ♥ I've been having major Snape feels of late, let me tell you, and it just tickles me pink to hear (still) that people think I've got him right! Above all else, he -- and all the other characters in this and every book -- are humans, and I seek to write humans, not wizards or werewolves or whatever else.

I keep forgetting what you have to look forward to and what's around the bend for you, and I'll bite my tongue so I don't give anything away. :P But I really hope you enjoy it! Or something along those lines...

Thank you for reviewing!

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