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Review:lia_2390 says:
Ooh yes. I do love a good mystery.

I wonder why Helen never thought of asking who recommended her to Mr E. I think it would make an interesting conversation, but it's too early in the game for those kind of revelations.

Helen continues to be awesome. There's much discussion on the rare 'strong female character' on the internet, and Helen simply proves to be a strong character. She's rebellious, looking out for /her/ needs, and she'll lie if she has to. However, she's not doing a great job at trying to lie to Moody. I suppose it takes one to know one.

With the tomb opening, I wonder if more than just a curse left it. I try not to believe in coincidences, so a lot of things that happened were inevitable. There is too much magic around to not think that this curse is legit. This are too weird at the moment. I keep thinking about Moody and his background. He might not be magical, but it doesn't mean he isn't supposed to be...i.e. suppose he's a Squib? (It's a bit far-fetched though) I won't put it past him to be the one who followed her into the alleyway and saw her Apparate. There are so many things that they need to say to each other, but they refuse.

Then there's this murder. I thought of the killing curse the moment it was mentioned that there was no blood. Something bigger is at stake here. It makes me think that someone is playing up this curse to hide something else.

Author's Response: Time for a confession: Helen never thought to ask because I didn't think of it. *hides* It would have been a good idea, wouldn't it? Even with what happens later, it's still something she has to figure out - how did Cadogan find her?

I'm so glad to hear that you like Helen. There was a time when I didn't particularly like her - she felt too far removed from me when I first started writing this story, but perhaps she's just someone I had to grow into. The fact that she's a Slytherin makes her perfect for this story because she needs to be resourceful and, more importantly, look after herself, no matter the cost. It's gotten her this far.

Sadly, I can't say more without being spoilerish. I feel like River Song when responding to your reviews, but too much of this story relies on the details.

Thank you again for your lovely reviews! ^_^ I hope that you keep enjoying this story!


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