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Review:lia_2390 says:
Oh boy. This chapter took a serious turn. I'd never say no to the Helen/Moody banter, but if only she wasn't so stubborn. I thought that he was the one who recommended her for the job with Mr Cadogan, but now I'm not so sure. I don't trust him at all and I highly doubt Cadogan is his real name. And as for Moody, I suspect he is trying desperately to warn her (though we got an admission about possible seduction! I'm a tad bit too excited about that, but never mind).

I think that Helen wasn't the only one to feel different when the tomb was opened. Maybe he's not so Muggle as she thinks.

While the possible threat that someone in her family is still looking for her, I think this one is much more immediate. It's only a matter of time until the curse manifests.

Author's Response: Oh yes, on with the banter. It's fantastic when you can find the right set of characters that can carry it off. When I re-read this chapter, I always giggle over the number of times that Helen thinks about Moody and how conscious she is of her actions around him. Cadogan is a far more shadowy figure in his apparent simplicity - Moody is indeed right to warn Helen that Cadogan isn't quite what he seems to be.

I want to respond to your other points, but I keep finding that my explanations are filled with spoilers. *hides* Sorry for this short response.

Thank you again for your reviews! It's wonderful to hear your thoughts on this story. :D


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