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Review:patronus_charm says:
I keep on seeing Clemence and I still havenít figured out which actress/singer/model/random person she is, so if you didnít mind telling me, that would save me from annoyance every time her saw her :P

If I thought Dom was scary before over the whole Scorose thing, I really didnít expect her to be even scarier over the whole Clemence/Albus debacle. The whole interrogation scene was really great! Clemence was thinking far too much which suggests something is out of place. Theory no. 1 she has suddenly realised she likes Albus. Theory no. 2 she has just realised she has liked Albus all long. Whether they are right is still unknown but Iím determined to find out :P

Itís strange but Iím really liking Appy. I donít know why because I strongly detest those girls in real life but here Iím not forced to interact with her so I can appreciate her comedy value with no annoyance! Of course it would be her who delivered the news on Scorose breaking up!

I really agree with Clemence, as I had been expecting thrown chairs or wands drawn, but I guess now I think about it does make sense that Rose would take the silent, regal approach to a break up and go her for not caving into peer pressure! Domís reaction to it was great, and I dread to think how fast her and Scorpius end up as an item. The expose of them was a little mean, and judging from the reveal of the next chapter it looks as if Rose isnít going to be too happy with it.

Hmm, so more developments on the Albus and Clemence front. I thought that seemed very sincere until one word Clemence said and it really stuck out Ė seduction. It made me wonder whether this is just an act to embarrass Clemence so she knows how others feel when she does it to him. It could be another one of my warped-reality theories but Iíll wait and see.

Another brilliant chapter!

-Kiana

Author's Response: She's Ellen Page xD Has the wit for the role!

Dom's got her information-weaseling from me :'D (oh dear). Give me a person and a goal and I'll get it out of them, largely because I lack the shame that shuts people's mouths--and I like knowing things.

Clemence's emotions are... more thought than they are felt at times. She acts on attraction and curiosity often, rather than the mushy-gushy.

Baaahaa, Appy is such a guilty pleasure to write. Totally lights up the chapter when she shows up with her craziness. And it's interesting that you call Rose regal, because I use that exact term in the next chapter! A regal rook is what she is.

Albus knows Clemence's weakness--there is something awfully attractive about a dash of mystery~ c:


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