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Review:patronus_charm says:
Just to let you know, you really werenít slow at responding! I thought when you said that it would take a month or so, but a couple of days is really nothing!

Pickett continued to amuse at the beginning of this chapter. I think itís just due to me forgetting that heís meant to be a Slytherin due to his insane amount of Ravenclaw like traits. I really love how you didnít just stick to the houses stereotypes like that as it was a lot of fun to see it in reverse. Dom is a definite Slytherin though! I like how you make her dislikeable as it makes for a more interesting read even if I do spend half the time mentally yelling at her.

Clemenceís descriptions of all the Potter children really made crack up! Iím dying to meet Lily because I really want to know whether sheís as big headed as Clemenceís description makes her out to be. Albus does intrigue me though. His dislike for the press strangely endeared me even more to him and it fits in even more with the whole dark and brooding mood. I seriously love your characterisation of him, and itís one of the best Iíve come along in a while :D

Apostrophe certainly is something! I honestly didnít know whether you were joking or not when you said that was her name and then when Appy said she preferred her name abbreviated like that it was only then that I realised you were serious! Just reading her in that small scene I think I was worn out by her chattering and energy. I do hope that this ridiculous party is covered because Iím certain that there will be plenty of moments to laugh at throughout it!

Bahaha that scene just made it. ♥ I was getting as anxious as Dom over whether they would break up or not, and I really hope that they do it soon just to stop Domís agitation seeping into me again. Then the ending! I really am beginning to feel sorry for poor old Albus with this stampede of girls following his every step. Then Clemenceís mixed in with them, ahaha sheís turning into a Quirky Girl now!

Another brilliant chapter ♥

-Kiana

Author's Response: Aah, I'm just used to responding to things within a few days, but when I get such nice, long reviews, I have to hunker down before responding, and it make take up to a week - which is a long time for me xD I was waiting until I posted the new chapter to respond, and then I got right to it!

I think there can be so much variety to houses once sorting focuses on houses being the traits that students value, rather than necessarily embody, and it explains students like Peter, a Gryffindor coward.

Baha, you somehow always pick out the characters that don't actually show up in the fic xD Lily doesn't actually attend Hogwarts (though this isn't mentioned, but it's my headcanon). She's a career woman at 14 and has a private tutor while on the road (on the floo?). As long as she stays out of trouble, the Potters are just happy she's happy pursuing her dreams.

There used to be this entire trend with next gen OC names that started with 'A' so I started thinking up the most inane nouns and out came Apostrophe Hyphen Colon (also known as '-;). She is quirky, stubborn, and violent, all the best traits OCs have to offer, eh? :D you've gotten to the ridiculous party by this time, so you already know what happens~ onward in my responding then!


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