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Review:toomanycurls says:
Besides Hagrid, Sirius seems like one of the few wizards with enough bravado to face off with giants. I mean, Marlene and Emmeline went with, but I don't think they'd go without him.

You have really good action through here. You give a good balance of plot movement and action. It was really scary and full of suspense.

I really like the small moments you add where Sirius and Emmeline connect. They're subtle and very well done.

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you think the action is okay, it's not something that I'm all that good at writing (though I am working on it). Thank you so much for the review!

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