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Review:toomanycurls says:
I love that Emmeline is a flawed character. She is becoming very richly developed. I'm rooting for her to embrace the witch in her. She's a great balance of flawed and likable.

I adore the line "no one liked secrets and lies". It's brilliant.

The way you write Sirius is very, well, seductive. :) Great job personification with him.

Great tension at the end of the chapter. It's not too cliff-y but it definitely greats a good amount of build up for the next installment.

Author's Response: thank you so much, espec. for mentioning the development thing. it's something that i'm trying to work on (though perhaps more on pw, it relates to here too). thank you so much! :3

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