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Review:toomanycurls says:
I can really see James being a fun-time dad. Well, I'm a little on the fence but it fits with his generally jocular personality. It's a great detail to throw in about the people in the story.

The Sirius/Emmeline "why did you go" discussion was awesome. I like that Sirius is so caring. He seems so much more mature than he's usually painted in Marauder Era fics. It fits well at his age. I mean, I'd hope to see a little more maturity after finishing school. It makes him even more of an attractive character. Great almost kiss. I'm dying to know if it's real interest or Sirius being a dog. :)

Oooh, Dumbledore! It made me laugh that Sirius stood up straight when he heard Dumbledore was there. Your wartime Dumbledore is great. He's to the point but still enigmatic. I also really, really, like that Emmeline isn't Miss "I know everyone even if there's no reason to think I have met them before". It makes the story seem that much more real to me.

The plot is forming very nicely. There's enough action to balance out the amount of detail being given.

Author's Response: ashjdkflhjfds I don't even know how to respond to this really except it's a great review and I love all the things you're pointing out :'D

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