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Review:toomanycurls says:
The mystery in this is killing me. I'm (of course) curious about this Paul guy and his relationship with Emmaline. I really like Marlene. She sounds like that one friend from high school that everyone has (in a fabulous way - she's really easy to relate to).

I liked how Lupin recruited Emmaline; great sales pitch. It's interesting to see Sirius so quiet and introspective. I like that spin on him (it indicates that he's interested in Emmaline).

Great inner-dialogue with her choice to join.

Plot-wise it's a good pace so far. I feel like there's enough to make me want to see more and read on. There's a good level of interesting without being interesting for the sake of pizzazz.

Author's Response: Ahhh this is pointing out all the things I wanted (I guess that's the point haha). Thank you!

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