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Review:toomanycurls says:
Great hook in the first chapter. I like that you have a familiar but generally obscure character. I find myself curious about her decision to change her name and live as a Muggle (I'm sure that will come out later on).

The dialogue flowed very well through the chapter. It felt quick and, well, conversational.

I'll definitely have more to say regarding characterization after a bit more development takes place.

Author's Response: Thank you! That means a lot. ^_^

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