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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hi!! I'm here to give you the review you requested. I'm sorry it's a bit late. :)

So, when you asked me to review this story and I saw that it had been nominate for several awards, I knew that I probably wouldn't have very much to say in the way of constructive criticism. And I don't!!! This chapter was so marvelously spellbinding and mysterious. There was not a word out of place, and each sentence was better than the last.

I especially liked how you interspersed the newspaper article with the Knight Bus scene, and how the words "Will you marry me?" kept popping up. It added to the mystery that is Scorpius and Elodie's relationship. Which, by the way, I can't wait to read more about! I am definitely coming back to read the rest of this story, whether you request another review or not! :)

In conclusion, you're really awesome, and I loved this first chapter. It's amazing how one can repair cliched writing after lots of time has passed. I hope that one day, I'm as great a writer as you are!

May your pen never run out of ink!

~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: No worries! I'm glad you're here!

Ehhh! I'm not sure about that! It was a nominee for a Dobby once, but not a finalist or anything exciting! But I'm really flattered by your comments and your praise!

I was actually hoping that you'd continue reading! The last chapter of this fic is the one I'm the least happy about, so it'd be great if you could continue to review this story and eventually get there!

Thanks for reviewing!


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