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Review:milominderbinder says:
So I LOVED this!

I'm doing the unexpected voice challenge too so I thought I'd come see your entry, and I thought it was really incredible. I've always been intrigued by Pansy - under the surface there has to be more than just the snippets of a shallow, mean girl we got in the books, and I think you captured that perfectly here.

Also, it was really fascinating because it made me think about the fact that for most people, the end of war wasn't going to immediately make them happy; for some it would actually make them more miserable.

Your writing style is also gorgeous, very flowing and almost lyrical in places. My favourite line was probably this one, one of the last, "Her angular cuts have now been smoothed down by everything seeping out". Gorgeous writing, and very symbolic.

Anyway, well done!

Author's Response: Can I just say that this review just about made my day? ♥

Wow, I still don't really know how to respond to this loveliness other than outright squeeing! I was always curious about her too, and when I saw the challenge I knew this would be a perfect chance to explore the deeper side to her.

I'm so glad that you liked the change, because I thought it was a lot of fun to see it from the other side where everything wasn't perfect and, in fact, bad as you said.

My writing style was a little different here so hearing you say that is really amazing! Thank you for all these wonderful compliments, they really did make my day! ♥

-Kiana


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