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Review:BLONDEbehaviour says:
Hello again :)

Well, i would definitely not mind walking into that situation, even if Ellie didn't! Though i can understand her annoyance, if it happens often enough, and he was considered a male majority of the time, it'd drive me a bit crazy too! I almost know the feeling here, i get along with the guys more than than the girls. Frustrating sometimes.

The running idea made up by her dad, and continued by signing a paper made me giggle! Sounds like something my dad would do. I find it particularly funny that he makes Chris continue it at Hogwarts, bet that really annoys Ellie. Wow, a lot must annoy her, i'm not surprised!

I really loove how you incorporate Ellie's nerdiness and smartness into her thoughts and speaking. It helps in remembering that she is a bright and witty girl, and gives us that image and characterization of her. Well done!

I found it very intriguing that you have two magical siblings that are from non-magic parents. It is a real change from the norm but i like it, and a interested in seeing if it goes anywhere, or has its own twist. Who knows! :D

It may do to show that times passes between the train ride and the feast, as i was a bit confused there as it just cuts straight to it without an real end to the other scene. so maybe even putting a line or three hours later, just to identify a different scene would be effective.

Well written and entertaining chapter! Am definitely excited for more Regulus :) Please re-request when the next chapter is posted!!

Blondie :)

Author's Response: Heya!

Haha, yeah. Neither would I, really, but I understand where she's coming from!

Ellie really does get annoyed by a lot. It's one of her character quirks - she's secretly a grouchy old man on the inside!

Thank you! I want her personality to shine through, but without it being in your face. Then I worry that I'm not being obvious enough. I'm glad that it's working out okay!

Well, their mother was a witch, so they do get it from somewhere. But being brought up by a Muggle definitely impacts on their lives.

Yes - that time jump. It needs some work, that's for sure! Thank you for your feedback. :)

Thanks so much for reviewing! I really appreciate it :D


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