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Review:Luna says:
I'm getting confused with your story. It's hard to keep up, seeing as the POV changes a lot. It sounds exaclty like a teen's diary I have to admit, but it's just getting very confusing, it leaves me frustrated. Are Cas and Alvie going to tell anyone how she got pregnant?

Author's Response: Ah :/ I'm sorry you're finding it confusing and I completely understand because there is a lot going on.
As for the teen diary thing, that is kind of intentional given the age of the characters and the general tone of confusion in the story. Cassie and Alvie are both young and naive and very confused/conflicted.
As for how she got pregnant, maybe they won't reveal that till the end of the story, if at all.
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I appreciate your comments and will try my best to make the story less confusing in the future! Xo


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