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Review:snowy_owl says:
Great job with your descriptions and detail. You definitely have a talent for description. I enjoyed this chapter a lot, but I was a bit confused about the stuffed penguin. It felt a bit forced at first, and then seemed to make more sense, but there wasn't really a point where it felt totally natural. Nonetheless, it was very well written, and I enjoyed your imagining of Grindelwald's decent into darkness. I look forward to reading your other chapters!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

This chapter was written for a challenge and the hardest part of it was including the penguin. :) I'll work on it a bit more and see if I can't improve how the penguin fits into the story.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

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