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Review:Jchrissy says:
This is going to be a pathetic short review, but tonight is the first free evening I've gotten and I want to review this amazing chapter before I go to sleep and get swiped back up into family time :P

I can not wait to figure out what this sand storm has done! Rose felt so disoriented, and you portrayed that really well throughout this chapter. I loved the way she sort of slipped in and out, and especially that you kept the confusions feeling as real to her as it does to us.

Even though we just got this short amount of time with them, I'm already excited to get to know these OC's! I have a soft sport or Charlotte but I'm not sure why yet :P

I felt so bad for Rose at the end of this. You really made her worry feel genuine, and the way she deducted that it had to have taken then back in time was so clever!

Okay, I'm so sorry again for this length, but it isn't any reflection on the chapter because I LOVED it.


Author's Response: Jami! I know how you feel given that my time spent on HPFF was seriously limited this summer, so don't worry at all!

Erm, whether the sandstorm had anything to do with Rose disappearing is yet to be revealed, but I like your predictions! I'm really glad that you found that her confusion real because it was quite a weird feeling to describe so I wasn't sure if I was hitting it or not.

I know how you feel because I have biography written for each of them I'm so excited about them :P Charlotte will appear a lot more, so don't worry about that!

Rose will improve a lot, so don't worry. I can't really say much but don't think is it is probably my best advice.

Don't worry at all about the length, I'm just touched that you made it over here with the business of your holiday! Thanks for an amazing review :D


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