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Review:ChinaDoll says:
Well, it's been fun. I was on a fan-fiction rampage going though the list and bookmarking things for later. It has been awhile from that day up till now. First off before I say anything, I'd like to comment that I'm volcanically thankful that you came back to us and fished this story.

I found this one first, I read though I'd say five or more chapters before it promoted me to read the first one. My views on the first story are mixed, but I really think you wrote Hermione and Draco well, it's not easy to take an already well known and loved characters and bring it into your own with out losing the substance that was already there from it's original creator, you however did it in the first book; which brings me to an actual point with the second book. I felt like this changed in this one, I realize that Hermione and Draco aren't apart of the main plot anymore but the chapters that they where in didn't seem to hold to much with them as characters. I also felt like though out the year of her pregnancy she should have gotten more letters from her parents.


As for everything else, the ending was sweet.

But most of everything before it was very hostile and 'public teen shcoolish' this is probably just me, I don't like that mentality. And you throw a bone with Scarlett's love affair but don't reconcile it before finishing the story.


Over all I thought it was cute enough, the only thing that kept me reading though was Chase (before the 17 years later...)

story rating 7 and three quarters/10. Chase 9/10 He lost a point in that last chapter, it's been seventeen years get over it, if Draco didn't want you to be with Adella you'd be dead by now!

Thanks for concluding.

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