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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi lovely!

Lily's outburst in this chapter was awesome. I love that not only was she yelling at the about how she was done hearing about Quidditch, but she could prove how much she'd had to hear by reciting it! That was awesome and I was seriously grinning!

The bit of bickering you have between friends always makes me smile. They feel natural together, and I'm seriously falling in love with your Narcissa!

Also, the fact that you had James asking Henry to tell him about himself seriously felt in character. Just as in-character as the fact that we could practically feel him chomping at the bit to follow up on the lead.

This was another awesome chapter, darling! I'm so excited to see the revelation behind the cliffy!

Author's Response: Jami! Sorry it took me so long to respond dear, I've kinda been living life as a hermit for the past month or so :P

Lily in my head is the type to just go with whatever the conversation is about, but after 7 years, I'm pretty sure she's had enough of Quidditch. Not the sport per se, but the boys' constant talk of players, stats and plays that she has no idea about but had to pick up.

There's no point being friends with someone if you can't banter about with them and tease them ;) I do love Narcissa, she's slowly becoming one of my favourite characters to write and I can't honestly believe that there was a time when I didn't even contemplate writing her.

Yes, James' manners have a slight precedence over most of his characteristics, including his impatience- something that he wasn't great at showing for most of his time at Hogwarts, in particular around Snape and Lily.

Thanks so much for the lovely review! I'll have to get writing then :D

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