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Review:Jchrissy says:
Finally finally finally!!! Hi! Why am I busier over vacation then when I'm working?!

I LOVE this chapter! The way it starts out brings us back to the reality that Eileen has a past, and we still are trying to piece together just what this girl comes from. The small mention of her kissing the headstone, and that being a show of affection that would never have been permitted in life, gave us a perfect glimpse into her past. It was a clear indication that she didn't grow up in a tight knit feels dominated sort of family, but you also don't indicate that it was a terrible upbringing either, so I feel like you're floating us at a good medium.

Awww there's such a sweet sort of feeling surrounding our future two love birds. I love that Eileen's picked up on his silent communications, like the nod, and that they really feel like they're growing comfortable around one another. And the present made my 'awws' come out loud and clear! I think you're finding such a perfect balance at showing their care developing them while still keeping their relationship sort of odd, if that makes sense :P!

This was such a perfect chapter; this story just keeps getting better and better, m'dear! I'm so proud of you for your dobby, and you know you absolutely deserves it!! WUB YOU and this amazing story!



Author's Response: Jami! Ahh, you're on vacation! You're just too much, betaing and popping over to review! ♥

Yay! You know I'm happy when you say you love a chapter - it means I'm doing something right! I feel like it's a good medium too. I like to think of some pureblood families as a good mixture. Not too "all the feels" and yet, not the grumpy cat. It fits her personality too really well, I think.

Aren't they the cutest? I love them so much, I can hardly stand it. For me, it's a very meant-to-be thing. They're getting comfortable around each other quickly, but they've still got that odd quirky sense about their relationship. I'm really glad you think it's working well!

Thank you so, so much! You're a big part of the genius behind this, you know! You keep me moving in the right direction! No, WUB YOU MORE! Talk soon after your vacation/adventures are over! ♥


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