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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello again! :) Ah, another great chapter and such a wonderful continuation off the first one. I'm pretty sure this chapter goes back in time, to before Molly began this strange relationship with the book, and it's very interesting to see what her world at Hogwarts is like. I enjoyed her relationship with Louis, and how they seem to be the only Weasley Ravenclaws. His puzzling over riddles to get into the common room was just too funny.

I think you did very well at situating Molly's dynamic with the rest of the Weasley cousins, like Victoire holding family meetings and James and Fred being pranksters. I also quite liked the references to the aunts and uncles, which situates the story well in with the canon characters. For most of the story so far I've been equating Molly quite a bit to Percy, but the line about the worn in book - where Molly thinks it's loved, and Percy would say badly taken care of - highlighted the differences between them so clearly and showed me how different they really are.

Another thing I enjoyed was how stereotypically studious the Ravenclaws are! It's great, how they fight for places to study in the common room, yet still seem like real, wholesome people. I liked the references to a few certain ones, like the boy who addressed Molly at the end, and Molly wondering if she should say goodbye to the girl who sat with her. It was very believable and realistic of a shy teenage girl, and very enjoyable.

I loved the description of Molly getting lost in her book, it was really beautiful. :) This was another brilliant chapter!

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