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Review:MargaretLane says:
Oh gosh, I hadn't even considered the round of funerals. Must have been awful.

And I love how you describe Harry's feelings after Remus and Tonks' funerals. Really emotive.

*laughs at Fred looking worse than when he was dead* I guess that line isn't meant to be funny, but it's just sort of the thought of somebody having been dead. And the idea of looking WORSE than when dead.

One thing, to the best of my knowledge, a "cot" means the same thing in England as it does here - a baby's bed with high sides. I'm guessing you mean a camp bed or something like that.

Must have been hard for Ron - wanting to be with Hermione when she goes to find her parents, but not wanting to leave while Fred is still in danger either.

Oh, Harry says he doesn't want the Weasleys to "loose everything in the process". Should be "lose".

Author's Response: Yeah, unless they had one large ceremony for the fallen, but that would have STILL been awful. And I just always imagined poor Harry would have felt like he needed to go to as many as possible.

Fred dying broke my heart the most, but Remus and Tonks were next in line. I really wish JKR would have let at least one of them live, so Harry's fate wasn't repeated in poor Teddy.

That's okay, you can laugh. Fred would probably appreciate the humor in the situation as well.

Ah yes, the cot. Someone else called me on that a while ago. This whole story actually needs a little bit of a edit. Not for content, but just to fix some mistakes I've found. There are words all over in my original document that are highlighted in red. But I'm trying to wait until I have a new chapter to put up before I do the editing as well. I don't want to jump my story to the recently updated list without a real update for people to find.

I had a hard time deciding to let Ron go with Hermione, but I just feel like there are lots of Weasleys to support Fred, but Hermione is so alone - as alone as Harry now her parents don't know her. She needed Ron.

Oops, another typo! Not sure I have that one marked. Better check.

Thanks again! So glad you are liking the story. Hope to see you back soon.


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