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Review:MargaretLane says:
I love Molly's reactions in this. "She took my children." Makes them sound about five, but I guess they will always be babies to her. Particularly at a time of crisis like this.

I think you have her completely in character.

Fred's still alive? It was beginning to look that way in the last chapter, but I didn't entirely believe it.

It does fit with canon though, not that fanfiction even has to, but now that I think of it, this could well happen even in the book and it wouldn't change anything we read.

I also like the way McGonagall says Harry made HER proud. It fit with the side of her we sometimes see in canon.

*laughs at McGonagall's comment about Molly resorting to Howlers* And love the comment referring to Harry as one of Molly's children. I can well imagine she'd think of him that way.

Author's Response: Molly cares so much for her family and children, I don't see her ever NOT seeing them as five-year-olds to some extent. And I don't mean that in a bad way towards Molly, just the way she worries for them. Also, thank you for the compliment! Sometimes writing Molly can be very hard!

Yeah. I did it. I surrendered to the cliche and brought him back from the dead. But, I just couldn't handle a Harry Potter future without my twins!

I tried really hard to try and find a loop hole that would let this story happen without getting me on the Canon Police Hit List, LOL. Not sure I completely did it, but hopefully it's better than it could have been. And you caught the trick I was playing on. Technically, I didn't change anything from the book - just events afterwards, which to me are fair game.

I really do think McGonagall had a soft spot for Harry and I like playing that up a bit when I can.

Thanks so much again for reading! I'm loving these reviews.


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