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Review:potterfan310 says:
Me again :)

I'm in agreement with Ellen, Poppy is rather calm about everything.

I really like this chapter, although it's a filler one and there's not much action it really shows more of Poppy's personality and her strong friendship with Ellen who seems like a really good friend as well as OC. I really like both of them and I think at the end Poppy is slowly starting to over come the shock and freak out.

"towards to her bedside locker" - This just sounds a bit American, you'd probably be better off saying bedside table.

Again the double spacing is the only thing that keeps averting ym eyes.

Definitely adding this to my favs and I can't wait for the next chapter, especially as it's in Al's point of view and I'm sure we'll see how he's handling things.

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph :)

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