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Review:potterfan310 says:
Hey there.

I Love reading Al/OC and Teen pregnancy (I'm weird :p) and I stumbled across this earlier today.

I like Poppy so far, even though we haven't seen that much of her personality I like that she's very organised and sort of a neat freak. It's a good different that will make her stand out. Her name keeps reminding of Poppy Moore from the film Wild Child, because the guy she fell for was Freddie Kingsley and it just keeps reminding of the film :)

It's nice and original to see that they're an actual couple because most of the time it's a one night stand. I really do like Al's reaction, I love it how he faints. If I was Poppy I would probably be freaking out a bit more. I mean did she realise because of symptoms that made her take a test or did someone mention something?

One thing I 'd think about sorting is the spacing between your paragraphs as it disrupts the flow and makes it harder to read.

It's a good start and I'm off to read chapter 2!

Sophie :D

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