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Review:lucyinthesky says:
Hi! I just found this awesome fic and so far I really like it! There are a few things tho, I want to point out to give you a true review. I'm intrigued by Gemma as a character, and she seems like someone to give Sirius a run for his money, but I don't think I'm feeling the way Sirius so quickly declared his _love_ for her, after onlhy ever having sex together (several times, but still). And now that fight just came out of nowhere. Sirius is looking like an insecure 13yo girl right now :D So far almost everything else seems brilliant and yes, all the smoking seems a bit gross, but it's realistic. Most Marauder fanfics I've read try to kind of skip the fact that this stuff was going on in the seventies/eighties and make it look like today. So that's a hats off to you, for making it work !!! I just really wanted to say that I found it a bit odd that Sirius would behave this way. But I'll definitely stay to see what happens. I'll let you know if I still like Sirius a bit later :P (Usually he's my favorite, so far I think I like Remus most.) Annnd yeah. ALSO: I kind of see Gemma as being a bit softer or err um rounder(?) than taylor swift (who is really skinny). For me Gemma has curves and round lips but not overweight at all. More like Scarlett Johansson. ;-) but thats just me. But yeah, I think you'll hear from me later babe! Over and out.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks for such an awesome review!

You are spot on - I am purposely making Sirius look like a 13 year old girl. I want to make him impulsive and irrational, but also passionate. He's never been in love before so now that he has a real girlfriend, he doesn't know how to act accordingly. That's also why he accuses her of being unfaithful. I want to make him extremely jealous and contradictory (as you'll see in later chapters XD), even though he loves her. This will all make sense in chapter 25, if you decide to continue reading.

The reason I chose Taylor Swift is because I liked her vintage-y hairdo with the blunt cut bangs. Otherwise, you're right, Gemma is more of a Scarlett Johansson :D

Thank you so so much for such a constructive review. I really really appreciate and hope you continue reading!


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