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Review:HeyMrsPotter says:
I'm really sad that I've caught up with this story now :( I guess I'll just have to start pestering you for updates!

I like that Hermione is starting to get suspicious of Draco now in spite of her feelings for him, I'm really intrigued as to where you'll go from here in terms of keeping to the HBP storyline.

Your characterisation in this of McGonagall was brilliant, just like with Hagrid and Dumbledore in the last one, I can just imagine her directing Draco to the Great Hall :D

There was one sentence I spotted in this "The Headmaster is once again gone out on business" that didn't sit quite right, I think maybe "The Headmaster is once again out on business" or "The Headmaster has once again gone out on business" would maybe flow a little better? It's a really minor thing though :)

If you need me I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hey Dee!! I've snuck onto my brothers laptop to get some stuff done :D Let's see how much I can accomplish...

Once again, thank you for sticking through this story of mine :) I am so honoured.

Aha, I was awake this whole night just planning how Draco's task would affect their relationship... you will see.

Aw, such a big compliment! Thank you!

Grrr, I notice you are right! I hate awkward sentences.. I'll fix it once my own comp is back up.

Aha! I'll know where to find you then!
Thanks so much!!

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