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Review:TheHouseElf says:
I said I'd be here with the fangirling, and here I come :P

First off, I want to say sorry. To you, for not reading this sooner, and to myself, because damn, by not reading this sooner I missed what is a great chapter.

OMG VAL! What is this?! All of the Camille/Xavier feels are just attacking me, all at once, it's not even fair. Just no. Your flashback fit in so well with the novel and the chapter and it made me want to cry. It was some pretty intense...stuff (I wanted to say another word there, but alas, I must keep it 12+). They are quickly becoming a favourite couple of mine and they deserve a ship name. Uh huh. Xamille.

And Astrid's part. I think you just want to overload me with feels today, don't you? I see the fledgling of a new relationship that is bound to be doomed. Nazi+French resistance= Never going to work out. Oh well, I SHALL GO DOWN WITH THIS SHIP (THAT ISN'T EVEN A SHIP YET BUT YOLO).

In all seriousness and honesty, this was an amazing chapter. Yet again, your writing catapults me to a time and place that I have never experienced myself, but I feel like I'm there, y'know?

Just a tiny critique, in the flashback, I don't think you need to tell the reader of Xavier's reasoning behind breaking Camille's heart. You don't need to tell us either that he doesn't actually mean his words. We can infer both from his actions and his body language. It's more interesting if you 'show, don't tell'

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