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Review:Leonore says:
I'm enjoying the story so far, especially how a lot of it links back to the original Harry Potter books. It would, however, be easier to read and understand if you were at least careful to start a new line for each new speaker - it makes conversations clearer. I would recommend careful proof-reading before posting - typos are understandable but there is the odd passage which doesn't quite make sense. I frequently notice passages like that in my own work, and I find you have to make sure you read through all the words and not just skim through the chapter to pick them out.

Sorry if I'm sounding a bit negative. I am really enjoying the story - your original plot is very well thought out and interesting - but it is made harder to read and appreciate by serious grammar issues. I look forward to finding out what happens next.

Keep the new chapters coming!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
I'm so sorry about the typos :( I know there's a system on the forums that allow people to proof read and am working on using it.
Could you be a bit specific of those in this chapter for me to fix? I always go through the chapter a number of times before putting them up but I know the odd number of words get past me.

Hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters!

SiriusAura92


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