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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi darling!!! Sorry again about the lateness of this!!

Oh my gosh. This poor girl really isn't winning the 'best life' award right now, is she? I love how you started this at such a chaotic point in her life. Harry leaving her for the Ch person and the new baby, then it being even worse with them staying with her until they get settled in a flat! Talk about adding insult to injury!

I love how humorous her narrative is. And the kind of funny where it isn't trying to shove one liners down your throat but still so full of awesome OMG moments.

Nisha has such a great personality so far. Not overly nice but not some total jerk. She has a super loveable feeling around here where you can kind if sense she's a train wreck and just want to hug her because of it, haha!

Your writing in this is really smooth and so easy to get into. I think first person is a hard point of view to master, but you write it so flawlessly!! I can imagine what's going on so clearly but you didn't add in too many descriptions to make it feel bogged down of anything.

I absolutely love this first chapter! I hope you continue!

Also,,just in case this new archives messes with my user name, this is Jami :P

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