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Review:nott theodore says:
Hi Val!

The flashback at the beginning was really interesting, and it helped explain a lot of things for me. I felt so sorry for Camille when Xavier was telling her that he was breaking up with her because he'd found someone else. She went from being so happy about seeing her fiance to having her heart broken in just a few minutes. I kind of hated Xavier for a few minutes at that point, but afterwards when I realised that he was doing it because of the resistance, I could understand it more. He thought that if she was able to hate him for breaking up with her, it would be easier for her. The amount they have to sacrifice to fight this war is so sad!

I know I've already said that I love the way that you use French in this story (you might have guessed I'm a bit obsessed with languages), the inclusion of it in all the right places makes everything feel much more authentic. Just little things like the date being written in French make me smile.

Astrid's doing a lot better than I thought - at least, nothing drastic seems to have happened to her yet. When you mentioned the tall officer in the last chapter I had a feeling that maybe he'd come into the story more, and it was good seeing Maximilian here. He didn't seem like a monster, and it's easy to forget that so many soldiers were just normal people. But I can't decide what he'll do in the future yet, although I think we may be seeing more of him and Astrid together!

Aw, the scene with Camille and Xavier! ♥ I'm really shipping the two of them together, and I hope it isn't too early in the story to be doing that! I liked learning more about their relationship in this story, and seeing that even though they had been in love and engaged, they didn't know everything about each other. I think Xavier's surprise when Camille said that she wouldn't want children straight away helped to show that they hadn't discussed everything together.

I don't think that it was too rushed at all! The last scene was great - except for that cliffhanger that you left us on! I hope that Xavier will be alright, and I'm just glad that I've got the next chapter to read straight away!

Sian :)

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