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Review:LilyEPotter says:
I'm back again for another review! :)

Again, the storyline is flowing well and the characterizations are good. :)

In the sentence "I don't know, should we tell them about the Horcrux's?", you could consider "Horcruxes".

Another phrase "knowing he needed some spare at the moment." I suspect "space" instead of "spare"?

It is a little surprising that they haven't convinced Harry to see Madam Pomfrey yet, considering what happened. But it also makes sense that he's going to try to hide the pain he's in for as long as possible.

I also like how Harry and Ginny have started their relationship back up with little fanfare. I am curious how George knew they were a couple when the rest of her family didn't know. I know it didn't say in the book, however, whether her parents and brothers besides Ron knew or not.

Good job!

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