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Review:LilyEPotter says:
This is a great beginning for a story!

One thing I saw was "tried his hardest to clam his heart", I suspect it should have been "calm". Another one I saw was "Harry look at her and too noticed" in which you might consider "also" instead of "too". There was also "Ginny kneeled down" where you might consider "knelt" instead of "kneeled".

I think that the story is flowing well and your characterizations are good.

It makes sense that Harry would have at least a bruise from where the Killing Curse hit him.

Good job!

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