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Review:Courtney says:
I am really loving your story and think the idea of being able to observe someone without them knowing is really interesting. While Jessica has a point that it would be powerful to see all sides of someone and realize that everyone can be good, bad, vulnerable, etc., I think that some people may actually be worse in private as they don't have to try to get approval or abide by society's norms as much. I guess I''m thinking of how some people act a certain way in public, but then are abusive or terrible with their family or employees, etc. But I guess the point is that no matter how bad someone is we probably all have moments that may us look better. And I guess we are going off the premise that James is actually a good person, though his words to Sirius in the last chapter definitely didn't make him seem less cocky or disrespectful to women, though it's probably because he's still putting up his persona. Also, I am a little confused about James' other relationships. From the things he said, it sounds like he's been with lots of girls, but then Jess was acting like he would never hookup with someone else because he liked Lily too much. So I'm interested to see more of him with other girls and hope he isn't too into using girls or treating them badly. I think it will be very interesting to see what you have Lily observe James doing when no one else is around. And I hope it doesn't get too private as that wouldn't be fair to James and would rightfully make him extremely upset and feel betrayed if he finds out about it. Anyway, I am very excited to see how things develop. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you! You know, I actually thought about all that stuff too, when I re-read the chapter before reading the reviews and I'm really glad that someone else had considered the plot enough to think of the same things. Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to leave such a thought-out review, it makes my day to read things like this! :)

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