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Review:TearsIMustConceal says:
It is so refreshing to see James in a different light! Don't get me wrong, I do enjoy the usual portrayal of him and I am guilty of writing him in that way but wow, it's good to see him a bit differently. I love the element of him being clueless about girls and oblivious to their. And his affectionate side is endearing, the song about his dead dog? It makes me want to hug him.

I loved the opening so much, you're writing is absolutely amazing! It flows perfectly and the conversational element really works. And Augusta, what can I say? I absolutely love her, she has the perfect combination of sarcasm and wit and does it in a way that isn't horrible. She's intriguing and already loveable and I really can't wait to read more of what she has to say about James and life in general.

I can't wait to read the next chapter which I am definitely doing after this!

Author's Response: Haha, I don't blame you at all! We all have our weak spots for hot guys being hot and/or arrogant and/or perfectly aggravating and/or perfect. I've written my fair share of them in the past too ;) But yes, it's always fun to do something different with a character's fanon image and derpy James is no exception. He's such a sweetie but so, so dumb. (And hot. Never discount the hot).

Ahh thanks so much! I'm glad it all works. My first-person, as I'm sure lots of first-person in fanfic is, tends towards the conversational and snarky and kind of dumb, so I'm glad it works for the story and for Augusta. Who in every respect is my baby, so I'm very happy to hear she isn't horrible! Let's just say she thinks rather highly of her intuition and her observational skills, and she's right as much as she is wrong. Shenanigans!

Thanks so much for such a great review and I hope you continue to enjoy~

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