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Review:LilyEPotter says:
Another good chapter!

I did see in this sentence "two were also asked to. I prayed" that it needed a "too" instead of "to".

Also, I saw a few nouns capitalized when they didn't need to be, like "Family" and "Sister". Again there were a few missing punctuation marks, most often seen at the end of a spoke phrase before the end quote marks.

The story flow was really good and it's a surprise for Ron to be so open about his feelings, though having survived a war could definitely make talking about feelings less scary. :)

Good job!

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