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Review:LilyEPotter says:
To meet one's death in the bathroom... how sad. Even if they were on Voldemort's side.

The story flow is doing well but I noticed a few punctuation errors. Nothing major, it just appears that a few are missing.

The last paragraph seems to have several topics in it and could possibly be split into more than one, which would also help with readability a little bit.

However, this chapter does not seem rushed and Harry, Ron and Hermione appear to be acting in canon.

Good job!

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